On Women's Day

  Tomorrow is March 8th. It is Women's Day, so I want to give my mother a surprise. First I am going to the supermarket and buy something , such as vegetables , fruits and some beautiful flowers. Then I will come back home to clean the house and do some cooking. When Mum comes back from work, she will be really excited. She will say that I am a nice boy and have grown up. I will be happy, too. I think I'll help my mother more in the future.

  作文地带评价:这是七年级英语外研版小学起点下Modules 3-4的语法要求,作者能正确运用一般将来进行描述;文笔流畅,语言精练,有真情实感;用词准确,没有语法错误,是篇相当不错的小学生佳作。

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